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When they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a savior, and will defend and deliver them.
It is from the following - Isaiah 19:20 New Revised Standard Version, Anglicised Catholic Edition (NRSVACE) 20?It will be a sign and a witness to the Lord of hosts in the land of Egypt; when they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a saviour, and will defend and deliver them. IRead more
It is from the following –
Isaiah 19:20
New Revised Standard Version, Anglicised Catholic Edition (NRSVACE)
20?It will be a sign and a witness to the Lord of hosts in the land of Egypt; when they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a saviour, and will defend and deliver them.
I was not sure what to specifically use as a log line.
In this case, “they” would be “the Jews” however, to a larger extent, it would be all of humanity.
The “”saviour” is obviously Jesus.
The “oppressors” are those people, places, and things opressing humanity. Just think about what you have been hearing on the news lately.
I am not just planning on a retelling of Jesus. What I have in mind has never been done the way that I intend to do it. It is a full gospel story.
As far as who is telling the story, it is from the point of view of the narrator –
Seeing that many others have undertaken to draw up accounts of the events that have reached their fulfillment among us, as these were handed down to us by those who from the outset were eyewitnesses and ministers of the word, I in my turn, after carefully going over the whole story from the beginning, have decided to write an ordered account for you, Theophilus, so that your Excellency may learn how well founded the teaching is that you have received. – Prologue I (Luke 1:1-4)
An art forgery expert is set on an involuntary adventure that promises to solve an old crime and reveal the secret of her vanished family, all this after a mysterious man delivers an unusual package to her apartment.
My biggest tip would be to make your logline chronological as your logline jumps around a bit and becomes very long and convoluted. Try and keep it clear and concise focusing on the story the way you would tell it in the screenplay.
My biggest tip would be to make your logline chronological as your logline jumps around a bit and becomes very long and convoluted. Try and keep it clear and concise focusing on the story the way you would tell it in the screenplay.
See lessAfter tipping off police to his brother’s latest heist, a torn man must struggle to escape the consequences while keeping the loot; but when his brother is released on bail, he must learn where his true loyalty lies before losing the people most dear to him.
Something I'm also struggling with on my own logline is making people sympathetic toward my MC due to his criminal behaviour. I think if you can make this happen and keep your word count down you're on the right track.
Something I’m also struggling with on my own logline is making people sympathetic toward my MC due to his criminal behaviour. I think if you can make this happen and keep your word count down you’re on the right track.
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