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  1. Posted: August 27, 2015In: Public

    An art forgery expert is set on an involuntary adventure that promises to solve an old crime and reveal the secret of her vanished family, all this after a mysterious man delivers an unusual package to her apartment.

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    Added an answer on July 21, 2016 at 7:17 am

    My biggest tip would be to make your logline chronological as your logline jumps around a bit and becomes very long and convoluted. Try and keep it clear and concise focusing on the story the way you would tell it in the screenplay.

    My biggest tip would be to make your logline chronological as your logline jumps around a bit and becomes very long and convoluted. Try and keep it clear and concise focusing on the story the way you would tell it in the screenplay.

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  2. Posted: August 25, 2015In: Public

    After tipping off police to his brother’s latest heist, a torn man must struggle to escape the consequences while keeping the loot; but when his brother is released on bail, he must learn where his true loyalty lies before losing the people most dear to him.

    benny Logliner
    Added an answer on July 2, 2016 at 7:24 am

    Something I'm also struggling with on my own logline is making people sympathetic toward my MC due to his criminal behaviour. I think if you can make this happen and keep your word count down you're on the right track.

    Something I’m also struggling with on my own logline is making people sympathetic toward my MC due to his criminal behaviour. I think if you can make this happen and keep your word count down you’re on the right track.

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  3. Posted: July 1, 2016In: Public

    Honeymooners in the mountains, a man and woman, witness a poaching. The poacher now wants them dead, As they fight for their lives, they learn that time is not what it seems.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 1, 2016 at 3:49 pm

    Agreed with the above.In addition, the logline mentions a man and woman these descriptions are too vague to work well in a logline. Which of them is the main character? What is his or her flaw? Men and women can be found anywhere, so describe what it is about these particular ones that makes them inRead more

    Agreed with the above.

    In addition, the logline mentions a man and woman these descriptions are too vague to work well in a logline. Which of them is the main character? What is his or her flaw?
    Men and women can be found anywhere, so describe what it is about these particular ones that makes them interesting characters in this story.

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