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When an ex-major-league pitcher travels back to Ireland to reunite with his greatest love, he discovers she is terminally ill with a 10-year-daughter who is actually his.
Don't give away the whole movie in the logline. Is the fact that he used to play ball relevant? Is he going back to Ireland specifically to find her? When a major league pitcher retires and returns to Ireland to find what he thought was his greatest love, only to find so much more.
Don’t give away the whole movie in the logline.
Is the fact that he used to play ball relevant? Is he going back to Ireland specifically to find her?
When a major league pitcher retires and returns to Ireland to find what he thought was his greatest love, only to find so much more.
See lessDuring the crucifixion, Jesus descends into Hell and must confront Satan to reclaim the keys to the kingdom.
I'm assuming that this is Biblically based, so you would want to correct that with "After being buried" as opposed to "During the Crucifixion". Beyond that tighten it just a bit: Prior to His resurrection, Jesus battles Satan for the keys to Death and Hell.
I’m assuming that this is Biblically based, so you would want to correct that with “After being buried” as opposed to “During the Crucifixion”.
See lessBeyond that tighten it just a bit:
Prior to His resurrection, Jesus battles Satan for the keys to Death and Hell.
A cryptographer, losing touch with reality, discovers that his CIA handler is being exploited as a sex slave. To save her he must abandon his life's work.
Hi TOAST. The element of his handler being exploited as a sex slave sounds almost comedic to me, but I'm not sure it's intended like that. Maybe something like "held prisoner" would alleviate that. Also, the antagonist is elusive here. Clearly, it is whoever is doing the exploiting and the hero's psRead more
Hi TOAST.
The element of his handler being exploited as a sex slave sounds almost comedic to me, but I’m not sure it’s intended like that. Maybe something like “held prisoner” would alleviate that. Also, the antagonist is elusive here. Clearly, it is whoever is doing the exploiting and the hero’s psychosis, but maybe it would benefit the logline to clarify where the main opposition will come from and why the adversary is so formidable to overcome.
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