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  1. Posted: August 21, 2015In: Public

    A new foster mother, walks away from her last hope of being a parent, when her teenager drives her uninsured car into the neighbour?s house.

    staryu Logliner
    Added an answer on April 29, 2016 at 10:52 am

    The plot isn't clear. Does she walk away because the teenager is a bad seed or because she goes bankrupt from having to pay for the car and the neighbor's property? Does social services think she is unfit?

    The plot isn’t clear.

    Does she walk away because the teenager is a bad seed or because she goes bankrupt from having to pay for the car and the neighbor’s property? Does social services think she is unfit?

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2015In: Public

    When a young woman foresees her community?s catastrophic doom, she must choose between keeping a solemn promise – and telling the life-saving truth.

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    Added an answer on April 29, 2016 at 10:27 am

    Who did she make the promise to? Why do they want her to stay quiet? How is the promise connected to the catastrophic doom?

    Who did she make the promise to? Why do they want her to stay quiet? How is the promise connected to the catastrophic doom?

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2015In: Public

    Against a backdrop of growing religious conflict with a foreign civilization, an idealistic scientist seeks truth while a young civil servant seeks power.

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    Added an answer on April 28, 2016 at 6:06 am

    I revised yours in an effort to fill in anything missing so I could see what else is missing and I think I agree, the thing missing is the so what. Here's my revision. When you get to the end (even with the made up details), you still ask, and what happened, so what. Can you provide that? When a MidRead more

    I revised yours in an effort to fill in anything missing so I could see what else is missing and I think I agree, the thing missing is the so what.
    Here’s my revision. When you get to the end (even with the made up details), you still ask, and what happened, so what. Can you provide that?
    When a Middle Eastern country is plunged into religious turbulence and war, two men seek a resolve. One, a scientist, finds anthropological reasons for the war while another, a civil servant, tries to solve the war by creating a new political s.ystem.

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