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After a land survey reveals that her fence is in the wrong place, a homeowner, unwilling to lose part of her backyard, wages war against her neighbor ? no matter what the law says.
I see the problem here. Maybe there should not be proof of law, and the act could have gone on unapproved at the time. That would give her two reasons to fight. How about: A generous neighbor replaces a downed fence when a homeowner is gone, but instead of following the original fence line, he angleRead more
I see the problem here. Maybe there should not be proof of law, and the act could have gone on unapproved at the time. That would give her two reasons to fight.
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A generous neighbor replaces a downed fence when a homeowner is gone, but instead of following the original fence line, he angles the new fence line to go around a tree, thus stealing inches of property from the homeowner – inches she wants back. A war is waged and the whole neighborhood will pay.
In a dystopian world, a geeky geneticist invents a super-seed to avert global starvation and finds himself pursued by dark corporate profiteers.
What is the cause of the Dystopia? Maybe the geneticist has a cure to the dystopia (e.g. nuclear war - a cure for radiation poisoning, or the like). The comments above about who's interested in this breakthrough?could be broader, governments ?or militias or newborn "states" would be more engaged andRead more
What is the cause of the Dystopia? Maybe the geneticist has a cure to the dystopia (e.g. nuclear war – a cure for radiation poisoning, or the like). The comments above about who’s interested in this breakthrough?could be broader, governments ?or militias or newborn “states” would be more engaged and likely to chase this breakthrough. It should be as important and urgent as water in the desert.
see 12 monkeys, soylent green and district 9 as examples of causal dystopia.
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A once indulgent father now battles his spoiled children who are stealing his retirement money.
Even if you don't want to cover off the inciting incident, it may be good to put it into a scenario to give it context. ?What is motivating his battle with his children? ?Perhaps just a "After discovering that adult children have been stealing his retirement money a (potential description) has to doRead more
Even if you don’t want to cover off the inciting incident, it may be good to put it into a scenario to give it context. ?What is motivating his battle with his children? ?Perhaps just a “After discovering that adult children have been stealing his retirement money a (potential description) has to do battle (what does that look like) to get his money back.
The “do battle” is that a court room drama or a family fight. ?His he scamming them to get his money back or just arguing his head off. ?Cramming all this into a few lines is very difficult.
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