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  1. Posted: August 7, 2015In: Public

    ?Hands of Stone? Boxer turned attorney, Maxx Cohen, takes off the gloves fighting an uphill battle with ruthless federal prosecutors while bobbing and weaving his way through representing the New York Mafia.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on August 8, 2015 at 11:41 am

    Hold off on the cutesy boxing lingo in a logline; just make it clear what the story's about.

    Hold off on the cutesy boxing lingo in a logline; just make it clear what the story’s about.

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  2. Posted: August 6, 2015In: Public

    A worker gets an email that he won a million dollars but his boss wants to steal it from him so they agree to battle each other in a nerf gun war.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on August 7, 2015 at 6:18 pm

    This may be a scene but not a whole plot. As a short it lacks plausibility most people now days would not believe from a mere email that they have actually won a million dollars and if they do they loose any credibility in the audiences mind. Secondly as stated above if the MC gets undeniable confirRead more

    This may be a scene but not a whole plot.

    As a short it lacks plausibility most people now days would not believe from a mere email that they have actually won a million dollars and if they do they loose any credibility in the audiences mind.

    Secondly as stated above if the MC gets undeniable confirmation that he has won then why not quit his job and tell the boss to stick it then keep his money.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Kim Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 7, 2015 at 3:45 am

    Needs to be more concise.

    Needs to be more concise.

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