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A worker gets an email that he won a million dollars but his boss wants to steal it from him so they agree to battle each other in a nerf gun war.
This may be a scene but not a whole plot. As a short it lacks plausibility most people now days would not believe from a mere email that they have actually won a million dollars and if they do they loose any credibility in the audiences mind. Secondly as stated above if the MC gets undeniable confirRead more
This may be a scene but not a whole plot.
As a short it lacks plausibility most people now days would not believe from a mere email that they have actually won a million dollars and if they do they loose any credibility in the audiences mind.
Secondly as stated above if the MC gets undeniable confirmation that he has won then why not quit his job and tell the boss to stick it then keep his money.
Hope this helps.
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Needs to be more concise.
Needs to be more concise.
See lessA man at his job in the office, discovers an email that states he has won a free 1 week trip to the millionaire host's house (which is hidden from civilization). little did he know that the host is an insane psychopathic maniac and tries to harm him and turn him into a panda bear and smuggle him across the US. now it's up to the main character to escape with his life, find civilization, and get help.
Hello, "a man" is too vague as a description for the main character. You have to focus on the most important elements to make the logline shorter. For exemple: "When a clumsy clerk win a week at a millionaire's mansion in the middle of the jungle, he find himself prisoner of his crazy host and mustRead more
Hello, “a man” is too vague as a description for the main character.
You have to focus on the most important elements to make the logline shorter.
For exemple:
“When a clumsy clerk win a week at a millionaire’s mansion in the middle of the jungle, he find himself prisoner of his crazy host and must escape before being turned into a panda bear.”
And if it’s a comedy (I hope so) you should use a funnier style in the logline.
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