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  1. Posted: July 23, 2015In: Public

    After a vagabond takes shelter in an abandon building, he discovers an alien invasion and must thwart it before the walls come tumbling down.

    Christopher Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 27, 2015 at 5:07 pm

    Thanks for the comments. Your questions are good, but I don't have it all worked out yet.

    Thanks for the comments. Your questions are good, but I don’t have it all worked out yet.

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2015In: Public

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    blossomingscripts Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 27, 2015 at 10:55 am

    The hero does have a dramatic goal -- to achieve fame. And the inciting incident is related to the goal. People with HPD are sexually provocative and crave attention. Breakups devastate them and often cause dramatic outbursts from them since their significant other is pretty much saying they don't wRead more

    The hero does have a dramatic goal — to achieve fame. And the inciting incident is related to the goal. People with HPD are sexually provocative and crave attention. Breakups devastate them and often cause dramatic outbursts from them since their significant other is pretty much saying they don’t want them around anymore. It is feasible to think such devastation could lead them to do something drastic like drop out of school due to embarrassment or emotional damage. And like I said, people with HPD crave attention (bombshell Marilyn Monroe is often cited as an example). And if you’re a sexually provocative woman in her early 20s looking for attention and fame, it is not a stretch to think you may wind up in the adult film industry. But thanks for the feedback. I’ll think about it a bit.

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2015In: Public

    Long ago mankind created beings believed to be perfect, and are now worshiped as gods. But when a man discovers their secret, he begins to question their divinity.

    Added an answer on July 24, 2015 at 9:00 pm

    Good note FFF. Fights make it less passive more active.

    Good note FFF. Fights make it less passive more active.

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