1. Posted: July 11, 2015In:

    After his girlfriend breaks up with him because he acts too ?white,? a bookish African-American teenager seeks guidance from his estranged, drug-dealing older sister on how to reinvent his image and win back the love of his life.

    blossomingscripts Penpusher

    appreciate all the feedback!

    appreciate all the feedback!

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  2. Posted: July 9, 2015In:

    After his older sister goes away on a business trip, a college dropout must take care of his hyperactive niece.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When he's forced to take care of his hyperactive niece, a college dropout must..." (Then tell us what he must do)

    “When he’s forced to take care of his hyperactive niece, a college dropout must…” (Then tell us what he must do)

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2015In:

    When told to deliver a package to a vicious mob boss, a desperate young Christian woman steals a car and finds herself menaced by a deranged truck driver pursuing her car across country roads, forcing her to devise a plan that would save her and her little brother held by the mob boss from death

    dpg Singularity

    As noted, the logline seems to have two antagonists. And if the package is that important to the mob boss, why would he entrust it to her to deliver instead of a trusted, competent minion?

    As noted, the logline seems to have two antagonists. And if the package is that important to the mob boss, why would he entrust it to her to deliver instead of a trusted, competent minion?

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