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  1. Posted: June 26, 2015In: Public

    A microbiologist and his son discover a new strain of mind controlling fungus in the deepest mine on earth, now they must stop it from getting to the surface and infecting the world above.

    FFF Mentor
    Added an answer on June 26, 2015 at 7:13 pm

    I like this a lot! In my opinion you should found some good adjectives to describe the main characters. I seea potential of "sacrifice" at the end, where the father or the son or someone unexpected decide to blow up the whole mine to save the others.

    I like this a lot!

    In my opinion you should found some good adjectives to describe the main characters. I seea potential of “sacrifice” at the end, where the father or the son or someone unexpected decide to blow up the whole mine to save the others.

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  2. Posted: June 24, 2015In: Public

    When a depressed office worker learns that his estranged, Chinese mob-boss father has been murdered, he must return home to avenge him!!

    shaankle Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 26, 2015 at 11:53 am

    There's no need for the exclamation points, and "When" is usually not a great start for loglines. Also, I find myself asking the question "So what?"

    There’s no need for the exclamation points, and “When” is usually not a great start for loglines. Also, I find myself asking the question “So what?”

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2015In: Public

    When a mortally wounded astronaut crashes into an isolated road-diner, the young waitress must protect herself and her customers from the oncoming alien threat!!

    Added an answer on June 26, 2015 at 8:41 am

    Well said, FFF.

    Well said, FFF.

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