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When medicine and science fail, and the only way to get humanity back on track is to rewind the clock, a group of historians and storytellers sit down to rewrite history
I like the concept involving time travel and historians, but what part do the storytellers play? Its missing a conflict and a sense of urgency also. Do they need to create a time machine before a certain date or before a certain event happens? What major conflicts get in their way? Is someone tryingRead more
I like the concept involving time travel and historians, but what part do the storytellers play? Its missing a conflict and a sense of urgency also. Do they need to create a time machine before a certain date or before a certain event happens? What major conflicts get in their way? Is someone trying to stop them? Are members of the group struggling to work together?
Their goal is a little vague as well and needs more specificity. Is it to simply build the time machine and use it, or to travel back in time to and change a certain thing/multiple things in order to improve the future?
Hope that helps and best of luck!
See lessWhen an introverted storyboard artist gets assigned to paint the picture of the culprit she has to infiltrate with the suspected underground network and paint all their portraits to find out who the killer really is.
This sounds like a great concept for a thriller. I do wonder, who is "the" culprit? Maybe specify what the culprit has done. Same goes for "the" underground network, I'd replace that with "an" underground network. Also, a comma somewhere in the middle would be great. Something like this: "When an inRead more
This sounds like a great concept for a thriller.
See lessI do wonder, who is “the” culprit? Maybe specify what the culprit has done. Same goes for “the” underground network, I’d replace that with “an” underground network. Also, a comma somewhere in the middle would be great. Something like this:
“When an introverted storyboard artist gets assigned a mysterious homicide, she has to infiltrate an underground network in order to unveil the killer’s true identity.”
When firefighters are sent out for the first time to battle a bushfire, a spy in their midst must betray his organisation to help stop the fire.
You should write the logline from the perspective of the lead character.
You should write the logline from the perspective of the lead character.
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