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Posted: February 10, 20152015-02-10T00:58:30+10:00 2015-02-10T00:58:30+10:00In: Public

A band, a famous rock band (The Beatles), decides about pressing probably their last LP. During the recording they don?t get along, but at last they publish it and they break up. The LP is a smash.

Abbey Road

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    1. Lucius Paisley Logliner
      2015-02-10T06:29:44+10:00Added an answer on February 10, 2015 at 6:29 am

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    2. Lucius Paisley Logliner
      2015-02-10T06:29:44+10:00Added an answer on February 10, 2015 at 6:29 am

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2015-02-10T08:34:56+10:00Added an answer on February 10, 2015 at 8:34 am

      A bit confusing.

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2015-02-10T08:34:56+10:00Added an answer on February 10, 2015 at 8:34 am

      A bit confusing.

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    5. Tony Edward Samurai
      2015-02-10T11:29:50+10:00Added an answer on February 10, 2015 at 11:29 am

      Yep – confusing, particularly “…miss one step to become legend…”… unless this is like an alternate reality type thing it doesn’t make sense…despite breaking up the Beatles are probably (still) the most legendary band in history…

      Also — in regards to “Abbey Road”, Is this a reference to the album or the studio? If it’s a reference to the album you might have another issue — despite Abbey Road being their last recorded effort (chronologically) compared to what happened between them on LET IT BE the recording of Abbey Road was a cakewalk– one of their most enjoyable to record… Let it Be was where you see their them fully implode… but it had taken awhile to get there — as most of them have said it was a slow death, probably going back to Brian Epstein’s death.

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    6. Tony Edward Samurai
      2015-02-10T11:29:50+10:00Added an answer on February 10, 2015 at 11:29 am

      Yep – confusing, particularly “…miss one step to become legend…”… unless this is like an alternate reality type thing it doesn’t make sense…despite breaking up the Beatles are probably (still) the most legendary band in history…

      Also — in regards to “Abbey Road”, Is this a reference to the album or the studio? If it’s a reference to the album you might have another issue — despite Abbey Road being their last recorded effort (chronologically) compared to what happened between them on LET IT BE the recording of Abbey Road was a cakewalk– one of their most enjoyable to record… Let it Be was where you see their them fully implode… but it had taken awhile to get there — as most of them have said it was a slow death, probably going back to Brian Epstein’s death.

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    7. [Deleted User]
      2015-02-11T09:11:38+10:00Added an answer on February 11, 2015 at 9:11 am

      This does not work as a logline. It’s too vague. I’d recommend reviewing the process of creating loglines. Who is the protagonist? What is their goal? What, or who, is the antagonist?

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      2015-02-11T09:11:38+10:00Added an answer on February 11, 2015 at 9:11 am

      This does not work as a logline. It’s too vague. I’d recommend reviewing the process of creating loglines. Who is the protagonist? What is their goal? What, or who, is the antagonist?

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    9. Karel Segers Logliner
      2015-02-11T19:44:20+10:00Added an answer on February 11, 2015 at 7:44 pm

      To me this sentence doesn’t make sense grammatically, either.
      Back to the drawing board!

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    10. Karel Segers Logliner
      2015-02-11T19:44:20+10:00Added an answer on February 11, 2015 at 7:44 pm

      To me this sentence doesn’t make sense grammatically, either.
      Back to the drawing board!

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    11. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2015-02-14T07:32:57+10:00Added an answer on February 14, 2015 at 7:32 am

      1969, I do believe the horse had bolted by then. To stop them becoming legends it would have to be 1963.

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    12. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2015-02-14T07:32:57+10:00Added an answer on February 14, 2015 at 7:32 am

      1969, I do believe the horse had bolted by then. To stop them becoming legends it would have to be 1963.

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