A brilliant pickup artist addicted to crack meets the love of his life in form of a stripper whom just laid of the pipe and he must now choose ? Love? Or crack.

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Posted: March 14, 20132013-03-14T02:52:34+10:00 2013-03-14T02:52:34+10:00In: Public

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Richiev · Answer 1 · 2013-03-17T04:26:10+10:00

I think the problem with this logline, it doesn’t explain why he can’t have both: Love and Crack.

Now if the love interest was a straight-edge stripper, then I could see there might be a conflict.

A few little changes and this logine should be fine. Good luck with this!

Karel Segers · Answer 2 · 2013-03-26T16:03:28+10:00

There’s conflict, alright… But to me it feels more like a decision moment rather than a story. Is this a short film?

I would like to understand what to expect in the 2nd act of this story. What is our main character effectively DOING in this film?