YURI*
A brilliant Russian Cadet shortly after his graduation day is being targeted by the CIA, his respond was a personal travel to NYC to change all well-known war tactics with the help of his genius weapons.
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I get that your protagonist is a recent Russian graduate … from where has he graduated?
Why is the CIA targeting him?
Why does he travel to NYC? To change war tactics? Who is at war? Why is New York the place to travel to change these tactics? What are the stakes of failure?
Hello dear ,
Thank you so much for being interested in “Yuri”.
here is the Synopsis of my Screenplay, hope if it helpful to answer all your questions.
Synopsis:
Yuri 22-year-old cadet with a unique childhood background which full of joy and powerful games comparing to any comparative boys, a kid who’s challenging death, a boy who’s playing as a jumper out of a fast moving train, a student who’s able answer the most mysterious question , and a horrible adventurer who went to Egypt just to step on the top of Egypt’s great pyramids only by climbing up its middle one ,
there’s no one who can stop Yuri or even stop his plans , Yuri’s plan had its remarkable start before the end of his live-show and during the graduation day of Russia?s war academy, it wasn’t just alive show but also the green light to move on his plan, A Russian friendship request is being delivered to the American president by a Russian air-striker right inside the presidential office of the White House , uncovering all the weak points and giving out the good reason to put them all in perspective , Yuri?s friendship request was denied by Mr. Nader and his government, later, George Maxwell, an American agent starts to deliver with his team members one organized attack against Yuri’s most respectful military figure in Russia, the American agents have managed to transport themselves with the help of a secret diving tool to the Russian shore, they start with kidnapping general Maxim after leaving a written note on his disk which shows clearly that the unknown cadet was the main reason behind their act, using the same diving tool to get a way back to America .
During the next couple of days Yuri had to attend a military trial in Moscow , Yuri?s judge said that he’s guilty for being unable to set the suitable plan which must provide the protection for general Maxim , during the next few weeks, Yuri had to leave Russia since his penalty is not to work on any Russian soil for anymore .
It wasn’t a big deal for someone like Yuri to legally get the American VISA even with his well-known aims against the American System , Yuri faces George Maxwell for the first time at John .F.Kennedy’s airport, 24 hours is all the time which Yuri gave to bring him one documented surrender by the American president himself, two genius weapons were kept hidden under Yuri?s suit gave him the advantage of the shocking surprise over everyone, the young Russian walks freely out to the city center with a promise to return back next day at midnight , booking a hotel room , exploring the city and its people, dancing with few Americans , saving a young lady from a certain rap ,feeling sadness for a miserable who’s living in the backstreet neighborhood , and causing a massive run away out of the city borders shortly before meeting George again , witnessing media lies and the clear intentions by the CIA and the American fleet to strike against the empty city just to kill him whatever the cost would be , using his first genius weapon against the American fleet, using his second genius weapon against the city entirely, and giving the American government no choices but to give up to him after setting free general Maxim to enjoy the greatest times in his military life .
Danny Desiree
Goldenboldeagle@Yahoo.Com
After graduating, a genius weapon designer is targeted by the CIA, but embarks on his own personal mission to change military tactics forever.
Might not be the story you’re after. I found the logline confusing. The grammar is poor. Details like where he’s heading aren’t really necessary. Just what he plans on doing.
After his mentor is kidnapped by the CIA, a brilliant Russian military prodigy must travel to New York and rescue him before the international incident leads to all out nuclear war.
As if we all are groups of crazy creatures just want to push the button with the first problem ?.No
This is between Yuri and George Maxwell including George’s superiors .
Thanks for the reply… but you confuse me 🙂
Your welcome , Richiev ,
why to confuse you ?!
the new generations are much more powerful than all nuclear reactors , I need to watch all the American movies to declare that Yuri is the first of his kind , I am proud to creat Yuri and to give him the power to do anything as a free powerful human being who you would meet anywhere on this planet but you never know his real name or his real nationality .
Some would think that Yuri is an act against the American pride , I understand that , but the truth is America is so powerful and if we have failed to creat a human being who can defeat the American power then what else power he should deal with ?! whatever you think , excuse me my friends Coz my Yuri have to bring the American power down 🙂
Hi Danny – there’s no chance I’m going to read all of that. It’s just too much. The point of the logline is to accurately convey the premise of your film, so that you don’t need to send someone a huge wall of text.
I asked the questions above because NONE of them are clearly explained in your logline. While not all of them may be necessary to include in the 30 odd words that convey the core idea of your film, at least a few of them need to be covered.
The most glaring issue is why he is going to NY – “to change war tactics” means nothing to the reader, because we don’t know how to visualise that. Does it mean he’s going to befriend a government official and slowly convince him of a different way of waging war? Or is he programming some powerful computer? Or is he waging guerilla warfare on the population of NY and therefore changing the way war is waged? You can see why we’re all having an issue understanding what your movie is about, and how we can help you refine the logline. The protagonist’s objective goal and the stakes of failure are unclear.
hmmm