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IvyEight6Penpusher
Posted: July 15, 20222022-07-15T22:49:40+10:00 2022-07-15T22:49:40+10:00In: Horror

A Japanese American young woman discovers deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2022-07-20T20:42:53+10:00Added an answer on July 20, 2022 at 8:42 pm

      I am not sure what you mean by deadly recordings? In what way are the recordings deadly? Does the person who watches the recordings die?

      Or instead, do you mean that she discovers recordings of her parent’s death, which is a completely different thing.

      “When she discovers recordings of the events leading to her parent’s death, a Japanese American must…” (Then tell us what the lead character must do)

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      • IvyEight6 Penpusher
        2022-07-20T22:52:12+10:00Replied to answer on July 20, 2022 at 10:52 pm

        I think she must try to escape herself from being killled.

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    2. NisVinten Logliner
      2022-07-16T21:23:39+10:00Added an answer on July 16, 2022 at 9:23 pm

      Exciting… but it’s like you need the action. How does the tapes/recordings turn her life around. What is her quest…?

      Maybe continue this:

      After finding deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly a Japanese Amarican woman…

      For example
      – seeks revenge
      – learns things about her past that forces her to change her life for good
      – discovers the president it the next target and has 24 hours to save his life..
      – tries to escape herself being killed

      You see?

      Good luck! 🙂

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      • IvyEight6 Penpusher
        2022-07-16T23:12:04+10:00Replied to answer on July 16, 2022 at 11:12 pm

        She learns things about her past.

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