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SaintPeterPenpusher
Posted: July 31, 20142014-07-31T04:31:28+10:00 2014-07-31T04:31:28+10:00In: Public

A former group of Navy Seals reunite for 1 more job after the leader of a Colombian Drug Cartel seeks revenge.

The Last Mission

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2014-07-31T08:56:26+10:00Added an answer on July 31, 2014 at 8:56 am

      I am not thrilled with the line, “1 more job…”

      You would think if a drug lord is after the team, they would reunite to take him down, not reunite to do one more job.

      This would be an example:
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      “When a powerful drug lord marks them for death, A former navy seal reunites his team to take down the drug lord the team believed to have killed ten years before.”
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      Of course your logline would differ to reflect the story you are trying to tell.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2014-07-31T08:56:26+10:00Added an answer on July 31, 2014 at 8:56 am

      I am not thrilled with the line, “1 more job…”

      You would think if a drug lord is after the team, they would reunite to take him down, not reunite to do one more job.

      This would be an example:
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      “When a powerful drug lord marks them for death, A former navy seal reunites his team to take down the drug lord the team believed to have killed ten years before.”
      —–
      Of course your logline would differ to reflect the story you are trying to tell.

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