Penpusher
Posted: 2013-08-24T11:35:29+10:00 In:

A hipster quest for "transcendent" duck tacos is derailed when a failed chef turned health inspector closes the duck truck down.

Hipsters’ Journey

Share

    Post a review

    You must login to add an answer.

    To see everything,

    8 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      >>>The pursuit of the tacos is the goal, Zen hipsters

      BUT the failed cook shuts down the duck taco truck. The major complication.

      Now what? WHO must do WHAT to get the truck back a-cookin’?

      • 0
    2. Penpusher

      The pursuit of the tacos is the goal 🙂 Zen hipsters!

      • 0

    3. this a very unusual story, I’m new to this but shouldn’t there be a goal which he needs to achieve because he has been derailed.

      • 0
    4. Samurai

      Still, what’s the conflict here? How does the protagonist seek to overcome this obstacle?

      • 0
    5. Penpusher

      Oh – that makes more sense then

      • 0
    6. Penpusher

      this is a short, maybe that’s why it seems it’s over just as it begins.

      • 0
    7. Penpusher

      Hi,

      It almost seems like the story is over before it begins. If perhaps the food truck drove cross country that would derail his quest and require your protagonist to venture out after it. If the food truck has been shut down though there doesn’t seem like there’s much he can do, unless the plot involves him cleaning the kitchen to bring it back up to standard?

      • 0
    8. Samurai

      Is this the event or the action? (The set up or the story?)

      • 0