A once successful landowner with picture perfect family, suddenly finds himself at the mercy of his arch-rival, forcing him to juggle single fatherhood with reclaiming his livelihood and dignity.

I think it would be a better logline if you could specify a few things:

– Who is the arch-rival to the protagonist? ?Another landowner? Someone else? Without knowing this, it’s hard to picture what he’s up against, how high the stakes are exactly…

– What happens that makes him at the mercy of the arch-rival? Does he owe him money? Without knowing this I don’t know what has happened to even cause this problem, and what got the story going.

– What does he have to do more specifically to reclaim his dignity and livelihood??What are we rooting for him to do in the story? If I know this, I am able to more clearly imagine how the movie will play out and what I will be watching this guy do.??Obviously you might have him do many things, but you might want to include?the main gist of his goal/action. From this we can also tell the genre — if it’s action oriented or more of a thriller, etc…

– I think including the two descriptions of the main character – “a once successful landowner with a perfect family” and “single father” confuses me on what’s?the most defining aspect of his character that directly relates to his story goal. It might be better to decide which you would like us to focus on more.