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A schoolboy with psychic abilities runs the risk of putting his relationships and loved-ones in danger when he starts making deals with the Devil

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    1. Logliner

      My word processor suggests “A male student with psychic abilities runs the risk of putting his relationships and loved-ones in danger when he starts making deals with the Devil.”

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    2. I agree with either making the risk specific or taking that phrase out altogether. I think it works just as well by simply saying he puts his loved ones in danger by making deals with the Devil.

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    3. Singularity

      “After a failed filmmaker makes a deal with the Devil for his film to be greenlit, his film must win an Oscar or his family are forfeit as payment.”

      This attempt I did is just an example: However you should tell us what the deal is and what the consequences are.

      Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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    4. Singularity

      “runs the risk ” — what is the specific risk that drives the plot?

      What is schoolboy’s objective goal; i.e. why is he making deals with the Devil?

      And I imagine they are Faustian bargains such that the kid is jeopardizing his own soul. But why would said deals jeopardize others?

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