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Izebob
Posted: August 7, 20142014-08-07T07:01:53+10:00 2014-08-07T07:01:53+10:00In: Public

A scientist made slave to a government UFO reverse engineering project must escape before the ones who created the craft come back to get what is theirs.

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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2014-08-12T00:24:38+10:00Added an answer on August 12, 2014 at 12:24 am

      Maybe try making the discovery of the aliens immanent return the inciting incident. This would clarify the start of the story.

      Good suggestion about the rogue General strait away puts images from ‘Doctor Strange Love’ and ‘Apocalypse Now’ in my mind that really helps picture the added stakes.

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2014-08-12T00:24:38+10:00Added an answer on August 12, 2014 at 12:24 am

      Maybe try making the discovery of the aliens immanent return the inciting incident. This would clarify the start of the story.

      Good suggestion about the rogue General strait away puts images from ‘Doctor Strange Love’ and ‘Apocalypse Now’ in my mind that really helps picture the added stakes.

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    3. AES84
      2014-08-08T10:23:23+10:00Added an answer on August 8, 2014 at 10:23 am

      What exactly is a Reverse UFO engineering project?

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    4. AES84
      2014-08-08T10:23:23+10:00Added an answer on August 8, 2014 at 10:23 am

      What exactly is a Reverse UFO engineering project?

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    5. Richiev Singularity
      2014-08-07T08:53:23+10:00Added an answer on August 7, 2014 at 8:53 am

      “After he’s conscripted by a rogue General to reverse engineer a crashed UFO, an absentminded scientist must escape before the aliens come back to get that’s theirs.”

      How does the scientist no the aliens are coming?

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    6. Richiev Singularity
      2014-08-07T08:53:23+10:00Added an answer on August 7, 2014 at 8:53 am

      “After he’s conscripted by a rogue General to reverse engineer a crashed UFO, an absentminded scientist must escape before the aliens come back to get that’s theirs.”

      How does the scientist no the aliens are coming?

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