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Posted: July 24, 20122012-07-24T02:21:40+10:00 2012-07-24T02:21:40+10:00In: Public

A teenage boy, desperate and lost, is 'adopted' by a violent vigilante. But will he have what it takes to join the gang, or will it go horribly wrong?

for an existing short film script.

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    1. 2012-08-22T09:59:01+10:00Added an answer on August 22, 2012 at 9:59 am

      he’s emotionally lost, fatherless. You’re right, things have already gone wrong, but they get much worse.

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    2. 2012-08-22T03:41:34+10:00Added an answer on August 22, 2012 at 3:41 am

      What is the boy desperate for; love, acceptance, vengeance? Is he lost, as in I can?t find my way back home? or is it an emotional loss that causes the desperation? If the boy has fallen in with a violent vigilante it sounds to me that things have already gone horribly wrong

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