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Dooke Starr
Posted: March 20, 20132013-03-20T07:07:24+10:00 2013-03-20T07:07:24+10:00In: Public

After a horrific accident, two quarreling lovers are left in a comatose state. Not knowing what had happened they must fall in love once again to be awakened.

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    1. Wilson Chan
      2013-08-07T01:10:35+10:00Added an answer on August 7, 2013 at 1:10 am

      Wait. If they’re both comatose, how can they do anything at all, let alone falling in love again?
      I think it’s better if you change it to having amnesia instead, as another poster suggested.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2013-04-12T13:10:30+10:00Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 1:10 pm

      If BOTH are comatose, how can they do anything, realize anything to fall in love again and wake up?

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    3. Dooke Starr
      2013-03-21T06:03:29+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 6:03 am

      the original concept was only one had amnesia and they didn’t realise they wetter in a dream state

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2013-03-20T07:31:58+10:00Added an answer on March 20, 2013 at 7:31 am

      How about this:

      “After a horrific accident two comatose lovers meet in a dream state with no memory and must fall in love again if they’re to awaken.”

      Is there an Antagonist or obstacle besides their amnesia?

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