Samurai
Posted: 2013-03-12T12:39:25+10:00 In:

After critiquing a bunch of other people's loglines, an optimistic screenwriter must improve his own poorly written ideas or wallow in unemployment forever. But what seems like a simple task soon reveals itself to be much harder than first anticipated …

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    1. Penpusher

      Giggles.

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    2. Singularity

      Have you been researching my life for this logline?

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    3. It needs shortening. I suggest:

      In a “Groundhog Day” meets ‘Jaws’ scenario a formerly optimistic screenwriter is doomed.

      New title: Chewed It Up and Spitted It Out, Again… and Again… and Again…

      That would be CUSOAaAaA!

      I suggest you seek Geno, the Shark-Eating Man guy. If nothing else his fingernails on the chalkboard routine will snap you out of your stupor.

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    4. It’s a tad long, could use some trimming. And who’s the antagonist? Where’s the hook? Sorry, this logline is very wanting. 🙂

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    5. Eric Thomas: Powerful Beyond Measure

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    6. I hope your optimistic screenwriter eventually wins. Good luck!

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    7. I think this logline needs to include how he overcomes this obstacle…

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