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variableUberwriter
Posted: February 6, 20182018-02-06T03:06:58+10:00 2018-02-06T03:06:58+10:00In: Comedy

After his egg family joins the “high class vegetarians”–due to his proposed thesis–Scrambled Jr. must resolve the growing vengeance of non-vegetables towards the privileges of being a vegetable

With the objective to indirectly address the issue of untouchability in India

possible title: “off the shelf (and into the war)”

premise: an egg must stop the war he feels responsible for–between the vegetables and the non-vegetables

(page 120 spoiler for its franchise)
…only to realize their one true enemy… the you-mans!!

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2018-02-06T07:17:56+10:00Added an answer on February 6, 2018 at 7:17 am

      You shouldn’t use a thesis as your inciting incident.

      What specific even sets your lead character into motion?
      What must your lead character do?
      What is standing in his way?

      Why would an egg become a high-class vegetarian?

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    2. wind Logliner
      2018-02-06T03:37:47+10:00Added an answer on February 6, 2018 at 3:37 am

      you could start your logline with:
      In a world where the vegetables and the non-vegetables have differing social classes…

      hope it helps

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