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patmonger
Posted: June 24, 20132013-06-24T03:44:31+10:00 2013-06-24T03:44:31+10:00In: Public

In the future, the UK is completely overseen by CCTV. There are three blind spots, and in one week four men must organise three high-profile murders ? one to take place in each.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2013-06-24T13:15:32+10:00Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 1:15 pm

      What kbfilmworks said. Are the assassins really the good guys going after the bad? Or the bad guys going after the worse? Or the bad guys targeting good guys?

      Whatever, it’s a promising premise that’s got me hooked.

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    2. kbfilmworks Samurai
      2013-06-24T07:28:20+10:00Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 7:28 am

      Actually, patmonger, what you have is a premise – not a logline which usually requires a protagonist, an antagonist, a conflict and dramatic stakes for the protagonist.

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    3. kbfilmworks Samurai
      2013-06-24T07:17:20+10:00Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 7:17 am

      CCTV is closed circuit television. Generally used for security surveillance. The UK is said to be the most surveilled society because we have the most CCTV cameras. This logline sounds like a very superior espionage thriller.

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    4. phoenixx50
      2013-06-24T05:01:57+10:00Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 5:01 am

      I don’t understand completely what’s taking place here. What is CCTV? What are blind spots? Three high profile murders to take place in each what? blindspot? It sounds riveting, but you should make a bit clearer.

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