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Driven by his father's envy and murderous past, a Viking prince is pursued by jealous gods and a dark temptress in his quest for redemption.

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    1. Singularity

      Why does the prince need redemption? The logline says his dad is the one with a murderous past, not the prince. The protagonist comes across as the undeserving victim (father’s envy and murderous past), not the offender.

      The prince seems to be more in need of rescuing than redemption.

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    2. Thanks, you made my day. Screenplay is based on the Norse sagas. Do you want to read it?
      kjkorberg@gmail.com

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    3. Redemption from his fathers envy and disapproval, wording could be better. thanks.

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    4. Penpusher

      It sounds very cool! #notcomplicated

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    5. Singularity

      First, I believe this idea has promise-

      -However, I am not sure what a “Quest for redemption” looks like. I know what a quest for a magic sword, or a quest to defeat the gods look like, but I’m drawing a blank at a quest for redemption.

      Also if he’s on a quest for redemption you should tell us what he is seeking redemption from.

      What did he do to need redemption and what must he do to get it.

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      Here would be an example of what I’m talking about:

      “After falling asleep on watch and allowing the enemy in the gates, a viking prince must hunt the barbarian invaders and save his sister who they’ve captured.”

      We know know what (In my example) he did to need redemption and what he must do in order to make amends for his mistake.
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      Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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