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ebabe
Posted: January 23, 20132013-01-23T11:31:41+10:00 2013-01-23T11:31:41+10:00In: Public

EBABE confronts danger, finds romance, humor, and financial success during her buying and selling eventures online.

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    1. Kriss Tolliday
      2013-01-23T21:12:33+10:00Added an answer on January 23, 2013 at 9:12 pm

      Yeah I think we need to know a lot more about what the story is. Does she have to remove herself from her desk and go into the real world o a mission to sell something?

      At the minute the story isn’t very compelling and needs something in the log line other than a woman sitting at a computer all day.

      Is it a film or a series? If it is a series this is like the overall story of the programme and each episode will have a different story to tell? I’m not really sure what it is and that needs to be clarified so readers aren’t confused.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2013-01-23T18:09:30+10:00Added an answer on January 23, 2013 at 6:09 pm

      Movies are a visual medium, I am not sure if someone sitting at a computer buying and selling things would necessarily make for a compelling movie.

      As for the logline, It seems more like a blurb than a logline. What is EBABE’s goal and who is standing in her way?

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