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holbrook99
Posted: November 6, 20132013-11-06T00:03:18+10:00 2013-11-06T00:03:18+10:00In: Public

Faced with the prospect of being forced into early retirement, a tough female detective agrees to one last big case. Her commitment to the force is questioned when she starts to fall in love with her mark.

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    1. kjk11
      2013-11-06T05:54:51+10:00Added an answer on November 6, 2013 at 5:54 am

      Shouldn’t be “a last big case” if she’s trying to avoid early retirement. Also “mark” suggests sucker, maybe suspect or perp would be better. Just some thoughts. Kerry

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2013-11-07T00:34:10+10:00Added an answer on November 7, 2013 at 12:34 am

      When a female detective volunteers to solve a tough case to that will guarantee her a promotion, she falls in love with the prime suspect.

      [The incentive of a carrot is always better than a stick. Besides, technically, unless she’s done something legally actionable, they can’t drum her out of the force. They can only dead her career as a negative inducement to get her to pull the pin herself.]

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