Strangers
Four Strangers meet in university, become best friends for two years, then one mistake finished everything.
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okay i ll rewrite it , thank you so much for your opinion, Soon i ll uploaded my new logline 🙂
okay i ll rewrite it , thank you so much for your opinion, Soon i ll uploaded my new logline 🙂
Okay, but in your amplification of your logline, the focus seemed to be on the relationship between two girl best-friends, a relationship that gets complicated and finally destroyed by the guy. (Which would seem to make the guy the antagonist.)
My primary concern about the logline is that it lacks a hook, something specific that immediately grabs my interest, that sets it apart from similar stories. “One mistake finished everything” is vague rather than specific. There are a 1,001 mistakes that can destroy a relationship. What is the specific mistake that sets this story apart from the 1,000 other stories where a mistake destroys a relationship?
Okay, but in your amplification of your logline, the focus seemed to be on the relationship between two girl best-friends, a relationship that gets complicated and finally destroyed by the guy. (Which would seem to make the guy the antagonist.)
My primary concern about the logline is that it lacks a hook, something specific that immediately grabs my interest, that sets it apart from similar stories. “One mistake finished everything” is vague rather than specific. There are a 1,001 mistakes that can destroy a relationship. What is the specific mistake that sets this story apart from the 1,000 other stories where a mistake destroys a relationship?
dpg … two chracters are the main focus, the only male and his lover.
dpg … two chracters are the main focus, the only male and his lover.
So it’s the story of the birth and death of some relationships? Who, among the four, stands out as the alpha-character, the protagonist who is the primary focus of the plot?
So it’s the story of the birth and death of some relationships? Who, among the four, stands out as the alpha-character, the protagonist who is the primary focus of the plot?
ElizabethBan what you think about it ?? what will be the ending and logline?
ElizabethBan what you think about it ?? what will be the ending and logline?
Actually the story is revolves around four friends(1 male and 3 female) who meet at university and become best friends, two of them fall in love. Girl is already engaged so they both agree on one thing that they always will be friends and keep in contact after university and even after her marriage. Then her fiance enter in the story, he create misunderstanding between four friends, Eventually he successful in his plan and all the friends scattered. The girl does not want to listen a single word and finished everything. Remaining two girls also do so. So the four fast friends now become the strangers.
So this is the journey from stranger to stranger.
Actually the story is revolves around four friends(1 male and 3 female) who meet at university and become best friends, two of them fall in love. Girl is already engaged so they both agree on one thing that they always will be friends and keep in contact after university and even after her marriage. Then her fiance enter in the story, he create misunderstanding between four friends, Eventually he successful in his plan and all the friends scattered. The girl does not want to listen a single word and finished everything. Remaining two girls also do so. So the four fast friends now become the strangers.
So this is the journey from stranger to stranger.
Four fast friends at university stop trusting each other when…… so, what’s the story?
Four fast friends at university stop trusting each other when…… so, what’s the story?
The End
The End