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What is at stake? Why would they need it?
Hannibal, as in Hannibal Lecter?
You might have copyright issues on a couple of fronts there — particularly given your dealing with Disney (whom I’m sure you’d know are insanely protective…)… but I’ve got to second nicholsandrewhalls questions — out there concept — in a potentially good way, but without any stakes or clearly identified reason for this mad caper it lacks a point… a critical element to any logline.
Look forward to seeing any revisions. Best of luck.
This is quite intriguing though, agree with the above but does make you want to know more!
I would think “Fort Knocks” would be the ultimate heist. Not sure from your logline why anyone would want or need Walt Disney’s head.
You should probably add some motivation to help the reader understand why it’s the ultimate heist and why the lead character need Disney’s head.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!!!
Knox