His optical implant switched off for non-payment of a loan, a 22nd Century private investigator must re-animate his hated android to help him solve the case of a missing billionaire robotics savant, in the process uncovering a militant group of androids and a maniacal Senator hell-bent on controlling the world

Hi Joe,

I think you can simplify this … a lot.

Try working from just this:

“a 22nd Century private investigator must re-animate his hated android to help him solve the case of a missing billionaire robotics savant.”

The additional info doesn’t feel essential to the concept.

The logline gives away too much of what could be exciting revelations, as well as taking the focus off what, I feel, will be the central dynamic of the story in the relationship between the detective and his android.

In addition, you may want to consider stating more concisely that the detective is blind; the feeling of the setting being the future is apparent in the fact that an android is critical to the story, and that the inciting action is the kidnapping of the billionaire robotics expert. However, there’s a tinge of comedy in the fact that the detective is left blind due to missing a loan payment. If intentional, try to enhance that; if not intentional and the story is more serious, then do away with it.