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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: May 31, 20132013-05-31T14:30:36+10:00 2013-05-31T14:30:36+10:00In: Public

In a post apocalyptic future, a lone cybernetic soldier finds his humanity again through a long lost love and sacrifice.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2013-06-02T10:55:25+10:00Added an answer on June 2, 2013 at 10:55 am

      The problem is, after reading this logline I have no idea what the story is about. I have a character and I have a setting but no story.
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      “When the woman he loved as a human is attacked by reavers, a cybernetic solder slowly rediscovers his humanity as he protects her town from those that want to claim their clean-water well.”
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      Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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