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Posted: June 23, 20202020-06-23T12:18:10+10:00 2020-06-23T12:18:10+10:00In: Horror

Massacres and mysterious disappearings are occuring in the Kabyle mountain regions of Algeria by a dangerous beast. A professional hunter is engaged by authorities to track down the creature and eliminate it, he will soon realize the task won’t be as simple as his previous achievements.

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      Richiev Singularity
      2020-06-23T14:19:47+10:00Added an answer on June 23, 2020 at 2:19 pm

      “When he’s hired to track down a mysterious beast who has been terrorizing the people of the Kabyle mountains, a professional hunter soon finds the tables turned when he and his crew become the hunted.”

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2020-06-28T02:50:55+10:00Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 2:50 am

      Richiev’s version is an improvement.

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      • Stephanie Penpusher
        2020-06-30T12:49:14+10:00Replied to answer on June 30, 2020 at 12:49 pm

        “he’s” Not the protagonist. Best in a logline to state the protagonist upfront.

        Best to start…”When (protagonist). Say what happens/occurs…then what they must do or not do and why…and what will be the result if or if the goal isn’t met.

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    3. Stephanie Penpusher
      2020-06-30T12:56:33+10:00Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 12:56 pm

      I think your log line would sound better as follows –

      When an expert hunter discovers a ferocious beast, he risks his reputation if he doesn’t pursue and capture it to save a village at the expense of endangering his team mates.

      What do you think?

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