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rahul
Posted: July 6, 20152015-07-06T20:07:56+10:00 2015-07-06T20:07:56+10:00In: Public

Natwar is a drama about a lower middle class man.who , after his innocent son arrested for being the accused of riots, wants to get his son free. This becomes increasingly difficult because of corrupt system.

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    1. 2015-07-06T22:44:42+10:00Added an answer on July 6, 2015 at 10:44 pm

      You describe a serious scenario. No need to tell us it’s a drama, and don’t mention the title. OK, now I’ll get to what you’re trying to say here:

      ‘After his son is arrested and charged with causing riots, a lower-middle-class man tries to prove his son’s innocence while battling corrupt officials.’

      Instead of telling us his class, how about using a word or words that describe a flaw that might hinder his attempts to help his son

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    2. FFF Mentor
      2015-07-07T00:47:40+10:00Added an answer on July 7, 2015 at 12:47 am

      Lee brooks’ version is not bad! Maybe the father is a violent man with a riot file and must learn diplomacy and justice to get his innocent son out of jail so that he can become a better man than him…

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    3. FFF Mentor
      2015-07-07T00:49:04+10:00Added an answer on July 7, 2015 at 12:49 am

      I mean, the violent father must prove that his son is not like him.

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    4. rahul
      2015-07-07T16:18:30+10:00Added an answer on July 7, 2015 at 4:18 pm

      thanks lee…i also strongly felt that there was no need to describe its genre and title. and you cleared my doubt…thanks for your support.

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    5. rahul
      2015-07-07T16:24:25+10:00Added an answer on July 7, 2015 at 4:24 pm

      thanks FFF for your view.father is not violent person, but his son just gets trapped by corrupt system.

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