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LaurenPenpusher
Posted: September 14, 20152015-09-14T02:41:52+10:00 2015-09-14T02:41:52+10:00In: Public

Survivors of the premature reformation of the supercontinent Pangaea tell their stories of the days after the disaster.

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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2015-09-29T13:37:52+10:00Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 1:37 pm

      Who is the main character and what does he or she want?

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    2. Lucius Paisley Logliner
      2015-09-14T11:49:17+10:00Added an answer on September 14, 2015 at 11:49 am

      This would make an interesting anthology movie, like Twilight Zone: The Movie.

      Three stories about people who are linked in some way and their interaction telling a “fourth” story that encompasses the whole, like Pulp Fiction.

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    3. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2015-09-14T06:35:28+10:00Added an answer on September 14, 2015 at 6:35 am

      This sounds like a documentary or mocumentary. If it is a story it should be told through the eyes of a character. Listen to the last few “scriptnotes” podcast. It is really good and talks about how to tell big stories using characters.

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    4. dpg Singularity
      2015-09-14T06:19:40+10:00Added an answer on September 14, 2015 at 6:19 am

      The film sets up an interesting situation. But “tell their stories” amounts to a string of pearls — a collection of incidents.

      A logline is not just about the pearls — it’s also about the string — the plot that links the pearls. What is the plot that arises from the situation that unifies all the incidents in a cause-and-effect sequence?

      And who is the lead character?

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