This is a completed screenplay (link below) in the vein of Stanley kubricks dark comedy “DR. Strangelove”.
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THE INCREDIBLY, ALMOST MADE UP TRUE STORY OF THORTON T. THORTON The wealthy owner of a television network creates a show so offensive it results in a global backlash by America and its allies who will do anything to prevent the airing of the network’s lastest sitcom– which takes place in a Nazi concentration camp.
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You haven’t told us what is standing in the way.
Who is the face of the opposition.?
Who is the face of those offended?
If he owns the network, why does he care?
You have only set up a situation. A man buys a network and creates offensive programming…
How does this situation create dramatic tension?
If he owns the network he can do what he wants… unless (This specific thing stands in the way)
thansnk for the suggetions. I’ve revised it. APpreciate you thoughts.
Hi pickerman123,
How about:
A deep delve into THORTON T’s television network and its most offensive tv show.
I hope this helps
thansnk for the suggetions. I’ve revised it. APpreciate you thoughts.
You haven’t told us what is standing in the way.
Who is the face of the opposition.?
Who is the face of those offended?
If he owns the network, why does he care?
You have only set up a situation. A man buys a network and creates offensive programming…
How does this situation create dramatic tension?
If he owns the network he can do what he wants… unless (This specific thing stands in the way)
I hate that, not only can I not edit my posts, I can’t erase it there is a double post! Writing is re-writing but on logline it, we are not able to do that. Editing is a writer’s biggest tool.
What is the so what of the most offensive programming?
thansnk for the suggetions. I’ve revised it. APpreciate you thoughts.
Hey guys:
Just revised today 7/27 based on your suggestions which really helped. thanks!
Rich