Penpusher
Posted: 2013-02-22T04:02:32+10:00 In:

The night New York City loses containment on the Zombie outbreak, the rookie member of a Covert Zombie Suppression Team must escort the plague's original carrier to a secure location for testing.

The Council of Blood: Patient Zero

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    5 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      Just curious; transporting Patient Zero sounds important. Why is the job handed to a rookie?

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    2. I understand the plot, but not the conflict. What happens if he fails? Why is the job being handed to him, instead of a more seasoned professional?

      You do a good job establishing the setting, and I can already see the potential for lots of great action as your MC fights to control his zombified charge through a minefield of the undead. Good luck with this!

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    3. Penpusher

      This is why I’m posting here.. Thanks for the insight! I’m having a lot of trouble distilling down this story to the basics. Maybe you have an opinion.. IF my main character isn’t human (but very similar) do I need to state that in the logline?

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    4. Singularity

      If it is common knowledge and important to the story, I would add that the protagonist isn’t quite human in the logline. (If it doesn’t add too many words)

      If it’s a big reveal I wouldn’t.

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    5. Penpusher

      Thanks! I gave it another shot on the main page.

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