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Title of Story: ASAP Written by: Leon E. Connell Logline: "ASAP" is a drama film in which a college student who brings the awareness of suicide among teenagers to a whole other level. Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy Type: Can be a Mini-Series Script, Short Story, or film God Bless, Leon E. Connell

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    1. Singularity

      A logline usually consists of a lead character, an event that set’s the story in motion, a goal and something standing in the way. If you can add irony into the logline it helps, this should be done in about 30 words.

      Example:

      “When his best friend commits suicide, a telephone phobic student creates his own suicide hotline but must fight his fears and the Dean who’s determined to terminate his unsanctioned enterprise.”

      Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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    2. Singularity

      What Richiev wrote here is a page explaining it in more detail:
      https://loglines.org/howto/

      There is no need to post anything but the logline in the body of the post by the way.

      Lastly I strongly suggest doing some more research into genre and format. Few if any producers will take “…Action, Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy?” seriously as a genre description, as each one of these is a genre in its own right.

      By type I think you mean format and these can be: Feature film, telemovie, short film, hour long pilot, half hour pilot or web-series.
      Best you know which suits your story the most so you can structure the plot to fit the conventions of the format and help a producer understand what you are pitching. Also no need to mention the format in the logline as it should describe the plot alone.

      Hope this helps.

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