Untitled Spy Adventure Comedy Feature
Two best friends who have desk jobs at a top secret spy agency are suddenly thrown into a massive conspiracy caused by a rogue agent.
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Yeah, I love ‘Spies Like Us’…
This is a situation not a story.
Yep, a situation, but no story, no plot. What’s the conspiracy? What’s the mission? What’s at stake if they fail?
Agreed with all the above.
Also descriptions such as “…a massive conspiracy?” and “…a rogue agent?” are too vague for use in a logline. Best to be more specific about the nature and detail of the elements of a story; what was the conspiracy and what was the unique scary nature of the antagonist or rogue agent?
The answers to these questions will explain the stakes and the obstacles the MC will face when trying to achieve the goal. Which incidentally is absent from the logline; what is the goal?
Hope this helps.
This is a good introduction to the plot but yes it does need to address what happens next. Also maybe a little wordy at the beginning. Can just say “Two pencil pushers at a top secret spy agency stumble onto a massive conspiracy etc… and then say what they must do next.