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Unfaithful man tries to enamor again his wife, who loses her memory in an accident while driving to the divorce case.

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    1. you might also want to try Regarding Henry, Harrison Ford for comparison.

      http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0102768/

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    2. Tony – it’s a comedy. You are right. I think that this concept is not much original. Today I found “The Vow” (http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1606389/) with almost the same premise :/

      nicholasandrewhalls – Protagonist cheated once and it was a mistake he wants to conceal.

      Thanks!

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    3. Samurai

      I’d listen to Richiev. Good changes.

      Can you be more specific about how long the husband has before she recovers her memories?

      Also … if the protagonist is unfaithful, why would the audience be rooting for him to trick his wife into staying with him? Can you clarify if he cheated once and has realised it was a mistake, something like that? Otherwise I’m rooting for the wife to realise before she gets trapped in that horrible marriage with a liar again.

      Title is a bit meh.

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    4. Is it a comedy? I like it too, but am reminded of ’50 first dates’… Not sure if that’s a good thing…

      Good luck with it.

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    5. Singularity

      Richiev:
      Another good polish.

      ifrost:
      Interesting premise.

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    6. Singularity

      This idea is interesting but the words are jumbled in a weird way making it awkward to read.

      “Unfaithful man tries to enamor again his wife…” This needs to be changed

      “Who…” This should be “When”

      “…loses her memory in an accident while driving to the divorce case.” I would start with this.
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      “When his wife loses her memory in an accident while driving to sign their divorce papers, and unfaithful man gets a second chance to win her back before she recovers her memories.”
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      Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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    7. Logliner

      Nicely done.

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