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henbSamurai
Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind?s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada?s ministerial election.
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UPDATE #2:
A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited for efficiently leading a double life, to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.
How does fighting with distinction in a laser war qualify the protagonist to work as a spy?
And the notion of fighting in a “Laser War” is more interesting than seducing and spying.? It seems to me the story hook is in prologue to the plot rather than the plot proper.
UPDATE #1:
A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.
I have no idea what this is about.? Who is the protagonist?? What is his objective goal?? What is the inciting incident?
Who’s the lead character?
What do they want?
What’s standing in their way?