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henbSamurai
Posted: June 2, 20192019-06-02T23:00:29+10:00 2019-06-02T23:00:29+10:00In: SciFi

Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind?s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada?s ministerial election.

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    1. henb Samurai
      2019-09-14T05:03:31+10:00Added an answer on September 14, 2019 at 5:03 am

      UPDATE #2:

      A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited for efficiently leading a double life, to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2019-09-10T06:32:08+10:00Added an answer on September 10, 2019 at 6:32 am

      How does fighting with distinction in a laser war qualify the protagonist to work as a spy?

      And the notion of fighting in a “Laser War” is more interesting than seducing and spying.? It seems to me the story hook is in prologue to the plot rather than the plot proper.

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    3. henb Samurai
      2019-09-10T04:19:20+10:00Added an answer on September 10, 2019 at 4:19 am

      UPDATE #1:

      A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.

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    4. dpg Singularity
      2019-06-04T02:18:59+10:00Added an answer on June 4, 2019 at 2:18 am

      I have no idea what this is about.? Who is the protagonist?? What is his objective goal?? What is the inciting incident?

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    5. Richiev Singularity
      2019-06-03T10:36:47+10:00Added an answer on June 3, 2019 at 10:36 am

      Who’s the lead character?

      What do they want?

      What’s standing in their way?

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