When a nightmare depicts her committing a murder, an insecure paramedic must make questionable decisions at work to avoid her fear of the nightmare coming true.
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When a nightmare depicts her committing a murder, an insecure paramedic must make questionable decisions at work to avoid her fear of the nightmare coming true.
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Haunted by nightmares in which she murders the man she is engaged to marry, a woman struggles against the growing urge to make the dream come true on their honeymoon.
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Or some such.? My general points are that 1] There’s more intrinsic conflict if the victim of her nightmares is the person she? loves most in her waking life, and 2] There’s the ticking clock (in this case an impending marriage) to heighten suspense.
Whatever.? I think its a raw gem of an idea that has the potential to be an interesting psycho-drama.
Who is she murdering?
Why does she believe the nightmare?
What questionable decisions?
I think it’s a very interesting concept, just add a few more details and make the logline a bit clearer. Will “the murder” she commit be at the hospital, and that is why she’s making questionable decisions?