Penpusher
Posted: 2015-04-07T22:24:50+10:00 In:

?When a traumatized family moves in to a new house on a remote island and gets hauted by a bloodthirsty dead plague doctor?an overprotective mother ?must find a way for her and her family to survive and force the plague doctor to cross over to the other side.

A plague awakens

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    1. Penpusher

      The fact that the mother is overprotective doesn’t really add anything but length to the logline….Now, if she was an unbelieving mother then I could see some added conflict…good luck!

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    2. Singularity

      In addition to the above questions consider the following as well prior to redrafting the logline.

      What is the inciting incident; is it moving to the house? Discovering the ghost? OR the ghost starting is haunting torment?

      What family is traumatised? What does a traumatised family mean? What are they traumatised from?

      Hope this helps.

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    3. is the Plague Doctor a ghost of sorts ? Is the family isolated on this island ?

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    4. Singularity

      Is the mom and her family the “tramatized family” or is she coming to rescue of a “traumatized” family? And how does “overprotective” figure in as a character flaw exacerbating the situation? Seems to me that having an “overprotective” parent is a character strength that any kids living in a haunted house would desperately welcome!

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    5. Singularity

      What’s a plague doctor?

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