Adventures in Love
When a young bride gets cold feet, her grandmother who has multiple ex-husbands is the only one who can save the day
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Who is the lead character, the bride or the Grandmother?
While at first glance it seems like the bride would be, however it is the Grandmother who has the goal, (saving the day) and seems to be moving the plot forward.
Who is the lead character, the bride or the Grandmother?
While at first glance it seems like the bride would be, however it is the Grandmother who has the goal, (saving the day) and seems to be moving the plot forward.
Thanks for your comment, Richiev.
I struggled a little bit with that question because the bride seemed to be the character that goes through the most change at the end of the story. The Grandmother is definitely the lead character. Do you think I should rephrase?
Thanks for your comment, Richiev.
I struggled a little bit with that question because the bride seemed to be the character that goes through the most change at the end of the story. The Grandmother is definitely the lead character. Do you think I should rephrase?
If the daughter is the lead character then you should give her a goal, or something she wants or needs.
If the grandmother is the lead character, the logline should be told from her perspective.
An example of the story told from the Grandmothers point of view:
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“After her granddaughter get’s cold feet, a free spirited grandmother recounts the ecstasy and tribulation of her own love life which led to meeting and losing the love of her life.”
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Hope that helped!
If the daughter is the lead character then you should give her a goal, or something she wants or needs.
If the grandmother is the lead character, the logline should be told from her perspective.
An example of the story told from the Grandmothers point of view:
—–
“After her granddaughter get’s cold feet, a free spirited grandmother recounts the ecstasy and tribulation of her own love life which led to meeting and losing the love of her life.”
—-
Hope that helped!
In what way? Who is the protagonist, the grandmother? What is personally at stake for her (other than that grandmothers always worry about their grandchildren)? What is the action she stakes after her granddaughter (presumably) leaves her groom at the altar?
In what way? Who is the protagonist, the grandmother? What is personally at stake for her (other than that grandmothers always worry about their grandchildren)? What is the action she stakes after her granddaughter (presumably) leaves her groom at the altar?
thank you both for your feedback and questions, they are very helpful. i’ll process and revise. i hope to post a revised logline soon.
happy holidays!
thank you both for your feedback and questions, they are very helpful. i’ll process and revise. i hope to post a revised logline soon.
happy holidays!