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When a young woman's grandmother selfishly dies whilst visiting their ancestral Outback town she, and her disparate sister, reluctantly stay on and inadvertently uncover their family's sordid past, forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities.

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    1. Logliner

      …. What identeties are we speaking of? Describe the protags! in what way are they ruthless (without knowing the title) ?

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    2. Logliner

      …. What identeties are we speaking of? Describe the protags! in what way are they ruthless (without knowing the title) ?

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    3. This sentence incorrectly says that the dead woman and her disparate sister reluctantly stay on.

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    4. This sentence incorrectly says that the dead woman and her disparate sister reluctantly stay on.

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    5. Thanks, Lee. ” She” is the young woman. I’ll reword it to say the grand daughter.

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    6. Thanks, Lee. ” She” is the young woman. I’ll reword it to say the grand daughter.

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    7. Thanks, Rutger. Not sure if there’s enough space in a log line to detail their identities? Thought perhaps it left a bit of a hook?

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    8. Thanks, Rutger. Not sure if there’s enough space in a log line to detail their identities? Thought perhaps it left a bit of a hook?

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    9. Singularity

      >>selfishly dies

      How is dying “selfishly” different from dying normally?

      >>forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities

      What does that specifically mean? As a result of the discovery of her family’s sordid past, what MUST she do? What becomes her objective goal?

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    10. Singularity

      >>selfishly dies

      How is dying “selfishly” different from dying normally?

      >>forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities

      What does that specifically mean? As a result of the discovery of her family’s sordid past, what MUST she do? What becomes her objective goal?

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    11. The first line confuses me – does the Grandmother die ‘whilst’ they are visiting their ancestral home, or does the death of the grandmother take them home? Your challenge with your logline will be to provide enough information to suggest that this is not simply another death = personal journey movie (ie; August Osage County, the Savages etc). What makes your movie unique?

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    12. The first line confuses me – does the Grandmother die ‘whilst’ they are visiting their ancestral home, or does the death of the grandmother take them home? Your challenge with your logline will be to provide enough information to suggest that this is not simply another death = personal journey movie (ie; August Osage County, the Savages etc). What makes your movie unique?

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