When a young woman's grandmother selfishly dies whilst visiting their ancestral Outback town she, and her disparate sister, reluctantly stay on and inadvertently uncover their family's sordid past, forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities.

The first line confuses me – does the Grandmother die ‘whilst’ they are visiting their ancestral home, or does the death of the grandmother take them home? Your challenge with your logline will be to provide enough information to suggest that this is not simply another death = personal journey movie (ie; August Osage County, the Savages etc). What makes your movie unique?

Thanks, Rutger. Not sure if there’s enough space in a log line to detail their identities? Thought perhaps it left a bit of a hook?

Thanks, Lee. ” She” is the young woman. I’ll reword it to say the grand daughter.

This sentence incorrectly says that the dead woman and her disparate sister reluctantly stay on.