Logliner
Posted: 2015-03-19T07:07:58+10:00 In:

When Bruce Lee loses his powers to Dr. Doom, he teams up with the Avengers to ?cross swords? with his nemesis – in an all evil parallel universe – and retake his might.

Bruce lee’s Redemption????? (A Hero’s Journey)

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    1. Logliner

      Thanks, Richiev this is very helpful. Not mixing fictional characters with real ones.

      The next logline will again be enlightened …

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    2. Logliner

      You are absolutely right. therefore this attempt is just practicing writing loglines. I don?t consider all loglines I write ?to become something?.

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    3. Logliner

      Yes, just practicing.

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    4. Singularity

      What karenfoley said. The copyright issues alone render the concept DOA.

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    5. Singularity

      1) Bruce lee didn’t have powers, he had skills. I don’t know how you would take someones skills away.

      2) Bruce Lee was a real person, the Avengers are fictional characters. Just saying it’s a parallel universe doesn’t mean the reader will suspend disbelief.

      3) Bruce Lee’s redemption: The title is confusing, nothing in the logline suggests Bruce Lee needs redemption.

      4) I agree with karenfoley. If this is a real project it won’t work because you would need the rights to make the movie… (and if it is a practice logline it needs some work.)

      Anyway, I hope those critiques helped, hope to see more of your loglines.

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    6. Why not create some original characters and exercise your creativity? It’s OK to ignore major copyright issues if this is a fan project or a short film with no commercial intentions. But as an idea for a feature film screenplay written by a writer without extensive Hollywood writing credits it’s frankly a non-starter.

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