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aidanthedude
Posted: March 21, 20132013-03-21T15:19:53+10:00 2013-03-21T15:19:53+10:00In: Public

When Earth is invaded by aliens, A Mafia enforcer must put his vandettas aside, unite the five families and defend the earth the only way he knows how: Violently.

Giovanni: Defender of Earth.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2013-03-21T16:03:55+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 4:03 pm

      Godfather and Aliens 🙂

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    2. Ryan Noyes
      2013-03-21T15:43:21+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 3:43 pm

      IDENTIFIES THE INCITING INCIDENT.

      IDENTIFIES THE FUNCTION OF THE PROTAGONIST AND INNER JOURNEY.

      IMPLIES THE STAKES.

      BUT THE GOAL IS MUDDLED BETWEEN UNITING THE FAMILIES AND SAVING THE EARTH, WHICH ONE IS MORE IMPORTANT, AIDAN?

      ALSO ‘FIVE FAMILIES’ IS SORT OF VAGUE.

      CHIN UP.

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    3. Moe Hamdy
      2013-03-21T15:38:52+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 3:38 pm

      Good potential for a feature film.

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    4. Val G Penpusher
      2013-03-21T15:35:46+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 3:35 pm

      Sounds good. He might need help from the alien’s mafia as well. Brothers in arm, you know.

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    5. scott davey
      2013-03-21T15:21:06+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 3:21 pm

      loves it

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