When testing a space-time machine, a brilliant young scientist finds herself stranded in space and time searching for a way home after her machine breaks down.
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When testing a space-time machine, a brilliant young scientist finds herself stranded in space and time searching for a way home after her machine breaks down.
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Hello,
I think you should give some details about the time and space of the story and explain what kind of action the scientist must perorm to solve his problem.
The stranded in space/time concept is very interesting, although I agree it needs clarity/more specific detail. Like
“When testing a space-time machine, a brilliant young scientist finds herself stranded in {WHERE/WHEN]?searching for a way home after her machine breaks down.”
Where/when could be anything as far as we know- 500 years in the future or past, 10 galaxies over, etc.?It appears you have a very specific setting in mind where the show takes place (as opposed to say a series where the protag is in a different place every episode). So I would describe that place (advanced alien race, etc.)
I think the WHERE/WHEN would probably be a key to how or why your TV show is compelling, so that needs to be in the logline.