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When testing a space-time machine, a brilliant young scientist finds herself stranded in space and time searching for a way home after her machine breaks down.

When testing a space-time machine, a brilliant young scientist finds herself stranded in space and time searching for a way home after her machine breaks down.
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    1. Best Answer
      Samurai

      The stranded in space/time concept is very interesting, although I agree it needs clarity/more specific detail. Like

      “When testing a space-time machine, a brilliant young scientist finds herself stranded in {WHERE/WHEN]?searching for a way home after her machine breaks down.”

      Where/when could be anything as far as we know- 500 years in the future or past, 10 galaxies over, etc.?It appears you have a very specific setting in mind where the show takes place (as opposed to say a series where the protag is in a different place every episode). So I would describe that place (advanced alien race, etc.)

      I think the WHERE/WHEN would probably be a key to how or why your TV show is compelling, so that needs to be in the logline.

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    2. Best Answer
      Mentor

      Hello,
      I think you should give some details about the time and space of the story and explain what kind of action the scientist must perorm to solve his problem.

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