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When the president fails to take his daughter camping during his reelection campaign, she must outsmart his security staff and kidnap him, or risk losing him to the job for another four years. //Anya
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In a loglines it helps if you tell it from one point of view. (The main character)
When the president… (This is the presidents point of view)
She must outsmart… (This is the first daughters point of view)
Maybe something like this:
“After her presidential father breaks his promise to take her camping, a determined first daughter schemes to kidnap him so they can spend one weekend together before she loses him for another four years.”
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
A fantastic idea, you describe what she must do; Both journey wise and in the situation and i can clearly see the moive 5/5 in my opinion but it is quiet big. Might wanna try and shorten it with something along; When the president does’nt bring his daughter during his reelection, she must outsmart his security and kidnap him, or risk losing her father for another period~ or something like that! Otherwise very good! /Hugo