A boy fights for survival during the 872 day siege of Leningrad.

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Brevity and simplicity are the essence of a good logline, unlike most writers you've certainly employed both in this first logline draft. Now pick and choose the specific detail, asked for in the above comments, that will make this a compelling story and subsequently a strong concept.

CraigDGriffiths · Overlord · 12,600 pts

There is a movie with Gabriel Byrne set during this event. ?It is about a female journo trying to save two children from starvation. ?This what we need here. A goal stated or some background.

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

I think this has been stressed but it is important to add what makes this character special? Why is HE your protagonist and not someone else? Is he disabled? An orphan? Other than that I like your simplicity great jobs

Karel Segers · Mentor · 2,810 pts

I think this has been stressed but it is important to add what makes this character special? Why is HE your protagonist and not someone else? Is he disabled? An orphan? Other than that I like your simplicity great jobs